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Still, I Feel Her Presence
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Still, I Feel Her Presence |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I wish some words I had for this woman I'd call my mom but I never got to know her so the words are slim to none, but in spite all just the same I miss her so very much. I wish that I could remember her very special touch.... but God took her away on a very special call when I was very young and yet so very small..... but still I felt her presence sometimes I still do now I just wish I could say I love you.... just once.........just.......somehow..... I know that she was wonderful so many times I have been told but if one memory I could recall... I'm sure it would be solid gold.... {repost} (thank you Susan, for your support.  )It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Bless you sweet a lovely write.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a beautiful mind! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You feel her presence, this shows in your beautiful words of longing. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
Love is NeverEver lost what ye feel is far more real than any living room couch thou intakes what can NEVER be lost forgive me in the touch and reach of all that is no child should ever have to lose that sacred gilded touch that only mother's love to womb can earthly reflect one love but those momemts that you know you know are real alive and those moments cannot be denied, I lift my eyes above in seeking a prayer knowing thy mother looks at thee with a proud golden air laughing, crying, comforting the days she is above the firmament and surrounds you every moment with that golden warmth and has you cry and longs each day to hear THREE MAGIC WORDS for she rains them down upon you always as always she through He is there said not in idleness but word inspired prayer forgive me my trespass but she is always there surrounding you with mother's love Forgive me is I tread where you wish none to go but I had to lift my heart and soul above that it be known she is everywhere within without again forgive me for your words brought tears and far more important wanting as your mother does God wanted you to know As my soul doth live the love you feel is REAL Forgive my intrusions I wish thee only well you see I kind of just follow orders Bless you |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ Know that she would adore the beauty of the woman you are~ This is poignantly lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Donna~ Beautiful tribute. Life is funny the things it throws at us. Yet we somehow seem to do okay... Maybe you got your strength from her...  "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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