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WildPoet
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0 posted 2004-02-20 03:34 AM


Flail not upon the skin of your soul
Gouging furrows of self loathing
Rather pour in abundance
The nectar of love
To reap the flowing river of joy
You have led others to  
Revitalizing their weary hearts
And refreshing their knowledge of self love
Do you deserve less than they
Cannot you see the special place
They all save for you
In their personal sphere of love

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Youngatheart
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1 posted 2004-02-20 03:53 AM


Positive self esteem? I guess we are our worst critics. You can't really see the best in others until you can find it in yourself. Wonderful write. Thank you.
Richy
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2 posted 2004-02-20 05:23 AM



Really enjoyed this WildPoet

A wonderful message!


Richy

WildPoet
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3 posted 2004-02-23 01:38 AM


Thank you, Youngatheart and Richy,

Sometimes we're hardest on ourselves and forget that we've helped others with the same problems.

WildPoet

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