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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-02-20 01:55 AM


Woman Within


She looked nice
in her colorful silk hanbok.
Tight on the top.
Loose on the bottom.
I touched the bright fabric.
I yearned to touch
the woman within.


JamesLee
February18
2004
Hanbok...Traditional Korean dress
worn for special occasions.
A fine silk hanbok can cost
from $500 to $5000.

© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

1 posted 2004-02-20 05:43 AM





James, this Hawaii you speak of

Sounds like an interesting place


Great Poem!





scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
2 posted 2004-02-20 09:01 AM


Clothes and make-up are window dressing.  A woman's soul and spirit and character lie within.  Well written James.

believe in what your heart feels...

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2004-02-20 09:14 AM


Nicely done sir...
telling of more than a physical desire...

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-02-20 01:15 PM


JamesMichael~
You leave a soft *sigh* upon the page~
Beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Hockeychick19
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Massachusetts, USA
5 posted 2004-02-21 01:01 AM


With very few words you've done it again... written another beautiful piece

~Kelly~

iliana
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6 posted 2004-02-21 01:05 AM


James -- Whoa.....quite a lot said here in a very unique way -- and educational, too!
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-02-21 03:05 AM


beautiful piece
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