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Open Poetry #31

Fill This Gulf

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-19 10:31 PM

Fill This Gulf

there are
empty echoes
bouncing on
endless ocean
I see
your dreams
they fly
above blue
and watch
their writings
silver lines
in cloudy sky
I look
across from
me and
I wish
you there
fill this gulf
I surrender
too much
salty sea
waiting counting
every grain
of sand

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-19 10:37 PM

Great talent here! Grover.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2004-02-19 10:43 PM

Oh Helen, this one really touched me
I know this feeling

Yes... every grain

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-02-19 10:46 PM

Beautiful Helen...
you captured this feeling perfectly.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-02-21 07:44 PM

Helen, I have known that salty sea waiting on the sand myself, a time or two, so I can relate to this outstanding write.

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

5 posted 2004-02-21 07:59 PM

and the sea surrenders
nothing
engulfing all
and me
and at horizon's break
drowns the sky

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-22 05:08 AM

beautiful

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2004-02-22 08:40 AM

Helen - this is just great - Paul

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

8 posted 2004-02-22 09:10 AM

A very touching write and a wonderful choice of words to image the event. A truly beautiful flow of imagery.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

9 posted 2004-02-22 12:02 PM

In time passing, I see that rose still has its beauty

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

10 posted 2004-02-22 12:05 PM

Beautifully written, Helen. It aches... ~K~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2004-02-22 03:42 PM

Beautiful, poignant write. *S*

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