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Sunday Child Wars...Inspired by garysgirl eor 's challenge
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Sunday Child Wars...Inspired by garysgirl eor 's challenge |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sunday's child shuffled between parents, her pain renewed every week, open wounds never healing a tug of war for her mother's approval, for her father's love, her emotions at risk who was to blame? me, she thought Sunday's child, Monday's problem in Sunday child wars.... there are no winners everyone loses |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ivy Rose, you are so right. And then, when you fall in love with someone who you think will be a good Dad to your child and found after they have died what awful things they have done, it's devastating. I'm glad that my writing inspired you to write this. Thank you.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Ivy, this is so very heartbreaking, dearest friend, no child should ever have to be part of this as parents must work together to provide the love and needs of a child, God Bless You, I send angel hugs to all children who are affected by this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Sad to say the divorce rate is higher than those who stay married! Grover. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ivy Rose, this is so true. I like the way you said it.  ......jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ivy Rose, in a few words you express this painful situation so powerfully. One of the major causes of children's suffering nowadays. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you met the challenge well |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Ivy Rose Well expressed....A challenging subject, to say the least Your brevity here has not taken away from the subject, but has enamled the pain of it on the hearts of the reader Good job__________ice ><> |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
So true and difficult to believe what children have and had to go through, its almost science fiction anymore to believe that children can be hurt in so many different ways. I thouroughly enjoyed and it was a humble write on behalf of a great friend of ours who is going through a difficult time. |
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