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David2
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0 posted 2004-02-19 08:15 PM



The Lifeline

My dearest love please hear these solemn cries
And let this search for words be not in vain.
Please understand the depth our love implies,
And know when all else fails our love remains.
I need to share the workings of your mind,
And understand your burdens and concerns,
Look to your thoughts my dear for there you’ll find,
The reason why my heart for you must yearn.
For honest love’s within and not without,
And there within lies beauty unsurpassed,
So please my sweet, release your every doubt,
And cling unto our love secure and fast.

As long as we may speak love won’t depart,
For thoughts are but the lifeline to your heart.

© Copyright 2004 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2004-02-20 08:45 AM


David2...Tender and touching words from your heart. Enjoyed very much.
This should be read by all that visit these pages. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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2 posted 2004-02-20 09:56 AM


If we don't keep the lines of communication open....relationships cannot be. This is a very interesting write to ponder. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

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3 posted 2004-02-20 01:14 PM


David~
It is simply my pleasure of this day to read you~
Thank you for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-02-20 08:53 PM


Very nice! Enjoyed reading it.
Grover
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5 posted 2004-02-20 08:55 PM


Enjoyed this! Grover.
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6 posted 2004-02-21 05:52 AM


sweet
Kicking Kim
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7 posted 2004-02-21 06:42 AM


"And when all else fails our love remains"

Then this is true love most definately!!  Beautiful read, this was my pleasure!!



^*Kim*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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