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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-19 08:05 PM



Long Corridor

the darkness
is the
passageway
to the light


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-19 08:51 PM




(big angel hugs) I too feel that somehow one cannot become a sensitive and giving soul that can relate to others pain without first experiencing it, sweet friend, the only thing above the hallway is no one should stay in the dark too long or they'll become zombies, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom
2 posted 2004-02-19 09:18 PM


and the patience
of your courage
lifts
the stone

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-02-20 02:40 AM


sometimes I forget

thanks for reminding

suthern
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4 posted 2004-02-20 11:38 AM


Now if only I can remember that. *S*
Martie
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5 posted 2004-02-20 03:12 PM


Helen

These few words are many truths.  Thank you!

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6 posted 2004-02-20 03:58 PM


Takes so little light to show the way. Takes so little light to shame the shadows.
icebox
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in the shadows
7 posted 2004-02-20 06:32 PM


Beautifully done!
vandana
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8 posted 2004-02-20 06:44 PM


enjoyed
choshi
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9 posted 2004-02-20 07:42 PM


Nice one - terse and on target ~P

the darkness
is the
passageway
to the light


Sometimes I wonder:
Does light cast shadows
or do shadows cast light?

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2004-02-21 03:26 AM


nodding vigorously "h"--but still, ain't it creepy when ya have to walk around the skeletons?

sighs and hugs ladyslick.

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