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Ravenwolfvoyager
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0 posted 2004-02-19 06:41 PM


Seeking honor before thy quivering quill
Finding absolution through the feather till  
Wishing restitution for my sanctity’s thrive
In peace through displacement from my sanities cry

Wishing for love’s promise before a summer’s night fall
Hoping that my heart will not resist its chiseled wall
Endeavoring a write so majestic before a violins rasp
Kneeing my corpse before the death keeper’s wrath

Take a rose by the helm of its prickly thorn
Spell cast my surrenderment to the love I adore
Drop me like trinkets of spell blinding snow
Carry me wayward through the north winds blow.  

Seeking to honor you before these days hath passed,
I find completeness in our sentimental heeding path.
For it is a spell bound sorceress who bewitches my fidelities mend
And the potion of your kiss that commences love to begin again

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-02-19 07:27 PM


Just today...I saw a tribute
to you...

you must have heard it
on the wind.

Welcome home!

Suetang
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2 posted 2004-02-19 07:43 PM


Hello Stranger :-)

It's nice to see you found your way home, where you belong.  Your words are music to my ears and I know there are so many people who will welcome you back with open arms.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Ravenwolfvoyager
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3 posted 2004-02-19 07:49 PM


I was on a mountain chanting and some sacred chant poofed me here :-) LOL Thank you Sue for your kind words.
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4 posted 2004-02-19 09:02 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous declaration of love, sweet friend, God Bless You and may each day be like falling in love all over again, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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5 posted 2004-02-19 09:09 PM


...romantic...sweetly flowing...its good to read something like this at the begining of the day..makes the heart lighter..
garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-02-19 09:17 PM


Seeking to honor you before these days hath passed,
I find completeness in our sentimental heeding path.
For it is a spell bound sorceress who bewitches my fidelities mend
And the potion of your kiss that commences love to begin again


Jeff, love is sometimes so different the
second time around.  I sure have missed you
and your wonderful writing around here
Hugs  
Ethel  

iliana
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7 posted 2004-02-19 09:28 PM


Jeff, this is as beautiful as the most beautiful red rose!  Awesome, awesome write!  Up on a mountain, chanting, huh?!  
A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2004-02-20 12:21 PM


Jeff,

  Where have you been...I have missed your poetry...where ever you went to...I can see it gave some good inspiration!

Glad to see you back!

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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9 posted 2004-02-20 09:40 AM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2004-02-20 11:23 AM


Jeff it is wonderful to have you home and with such a beautiful write you bless us with!
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11 posted 2004-02-20 11:46 AM


Welcome home! *S* This beautiful write reminds me why you were missed. *S*
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12 posted 2004-02-20 12:30 PM


wow! gorgeous piece!
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13 posted 2004-02-20 12:59 PM


Jeff~
I smile in the easy knowing ... that you *gift* us ... just when we need it most~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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ThisDiamond
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14 posted 2004-02-20 03:56 PM


The mountain spirits are half way to the sun...Smiling...what Marge said!
TD

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2004-02-20 07:39 PM


Ravenwolfvoyager,
Your talent is showing. A pleasure to read.

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