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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-02-19 02:23 PM

It's the stillness.

Grown heavy between us...as if even the
subtle movement of our breath belongs
to nothing more than this.

We drink this in.

In time...we will give ourselves
back to motion.

Exchanging silence for the growling
needs of our demands.

Yet for now...we lie thick in the
stillness of our moment.

And everything else...

Waits.

Eric

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

1 posted 2004-02-19 02:25 PM

What rich sensuality. I like this very much!

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

2 posted 2004-02-19 03:31 PM

Nice Eric, You bring me close up into this poignant moment...~P

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-02-19 06:01 PM

Very sensual Eric....
Extremely well written.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2004-02-19 06:43 PM

(big angel hugs) Oh Eric, this is wonderful, sweet friend, such romance always sings in your words, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

5 posted 2004-02-19 06:52 PM

Outstanding write Ericc!! Silence is deafening. Thank you for sharing this great piece of work.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2004-02-19 07:54 PM

Yet for now...we lie thick in the
stillness of our moment.

And everything else...

Waits.
I love this! Excellent. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-02-19 09:18 PM

There are so many forms
of stillness...

so very many.

This encompasses two, or three.

Thank you, Ericc.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2004-02-20 12:28 PM

Waiting to see your words posted in poetry wass well worth the wait!

~ARH

Love and Hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-02-20 06:50 AM

In the stillness you touch upon another world, beyond motion. And there is such peace emanating from your words, all the growling needs dissolve. Thank you dear Eric for sharing this magical place with us.

I love you. Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-02-21 03:56 AM

excellent...great piece

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

11 posted 2004-02-21 05:03 PM

very stimulating and sensual i thank you very much

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2004-02-21 05:04 PM

Ericc -- I liked the way you made the world hold its breath in this one! ......jo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2004-02-23 09:25 PM

The waiting is a long time coming,
and all the better when it's worth it.

Nicely done, Ericc~

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