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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-02-19 12:05 PM



It Still Reminds Me Of When

My mind went the places
Neath the stars above
It still reminds me of when
My heart was falling in love

I had never kept it secret
Yes I knew you could tell
It still reminds me of when
My heart came out the shell

Expressing our emotions
Hoping feelings matched
It still reminds me of when
My heart became attached

Fulfilling so many dreams
Love giving us the need
It still reminds me of when
My heart and mind agreed

Memories filling  my mind
Anytime its there to view
It still reminds me of when
My heart had fallen for you

Forever in heart and mind
All that was written above
It still reminds me of when
My heart had grown to love

HopeĀ©2004

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Death
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1 posted 2004-02-19 12:17 PM


You remind us
when we all took
that oh-so-long fall
unique to each led us no closer
to thr ground

thanks ( I think for the reminder)
Ahh well, much better to know the heart
still bleeds than reach into a coal bin
which you have obviously maintained fluidity

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

*Belabebeautiful*
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2 posted 2004-02-19 01:17 AM


how sweet and romantic! It warmed my soul to read this, I always am a sucker for a good love poem and this was most definitly one of the better one's that I have read. So beautiful...sigh...
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-19 02:52 AM


you know we can relate to one another here...
HopeS
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4 posted 2004-02-19 02:59 AM


Hey thanks Death .... so glad I can offer those reminders

Hope

HopeS
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5 posted 2004-02-19 03:02 AM


Hey Bella thanks for wonderful reply , I was happy to be sharing the warmth ... yes I am an incurable romantic

Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-02-19 03:03 AM


Hey thanks so much Dixie , relate with you , yes and here are huge Hugs

Hope

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7 posted 2004-02-19 06:18 AM



So very beautiful Hope!

So nice to see you writing this way!




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