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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-02-18 10:26 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

Play for me a love song
That's bound to sweep me off my feet
Take me closer towards heaven
And make my heart skip a beat

Touch me deep inside
Let me feel your soft caress
For so long my heart lay dormant
Like a forgotten wilderness

Take me to the ocean
Beside a sea of sapphire blue
Look deep into my eyes
And speak words of love so true

Write for me a love poem
Just like in the days of old
My love for you is second nature
For you to have and always hold

Lay me down beneath the moonlight
And kiss me softly on the brow
My heart no longer looks for love
For it is here and now

* * *

"Love is a fruit in season at all times,
and in reach of every hand"


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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1 posted 2004-02-18 11:23 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Sue.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-02-19 03:20 AM


you just sprout love on these pages...wow!
Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

3 posted 2004-02-19 06:15 AM



Loved this Sue

And I really liked the added
verse, at the end:

"Love is a fruit in season at all times,
and in reach of every hand"


Your heart is overflowing with love Sue!


Thanks!





illusion
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4 posted 2004-02-19 02:10 PM


This is very lovely.
garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-02-19 02:12 PM


Sue, this is so beautiful.
I love to read your poems.
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2004-02-19 07:17 PM


As always a masterpiece Sue. Beautifully done my friend.
Ivy Rose
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7 posted 2004-02-19 08:45 PM


Sue, a very tender and passionate declaration of the love inside your heart. Enjoyed this poem so very much. ***Ivy Rose
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8 posted 2004-02-19 08:46 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, and may your heart continue to explore the world with love on the grand adventure of life, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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