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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-02-18 09:05 PM



What would happen if you kissed me
will you pretend that you would
miss me? Would your heart crave
one more?

Or would you forget me like
once before. Ice cold rain
drops dripping off your
crimson face. Your eyes
how they glow in the
moonlight.

Will you hold me tight
tonight? Would the
stars twinkle again
oh so bright?

Your hands as they caress
my hips your lips your
sweet sweet tender lips

oh how I yern for one
last kiss just like once
before let me feel them like
i felt your love once more.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2004-02-18 09:12 PM


Very, very good ... if it were up to me, such a kiss would be given...

jwesley

J.Samm
Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines
2 posted 2004-02-18 09:26 PM


passionate. mwah!
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2004-02-18 09:31 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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4 posted 2004-02-19 12:06 PM


Julie, I hope you get that
kiss that you desire so much.
Hugs  
Ethel

illusion
Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296

5 posted 2004-02-19 02:08 PM


Kisses are hard to stop craving, aren't they? Nice poem.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2004-02-20 01:35 AM


Very nice...James
Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

7 posted 2004-02-20 04:58 AM



I don't think he'd have to
pretend he misses you...

This was really nice Julie


Much Enjoyed!

Richy


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