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Passions Eyes
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Passions Eyes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Passions Eyes They burn with fervor and with flame And turn the moments to acclaim Simmer at a high degree Light the way to ecstasy They glimmer and they glow and sew They shimmer and they crow and flow The very fever of the goal Makes a diva of the soul A wine that’s stirs with irons hot And warms the heart with megawatt. Is of Braille a taping cane? The secrets of minds inane. An ecstasies forbidden fruit A sacred song upon a lute A feeling that is so intense It leaves you standing in suspense. And though I’ve touched it once or twice You cannot stay in paradise. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So much passion today, dear Seymour! And though I’ve touched it once or twice You cannot stay in paradise. But it's so good to reach such heights, isn't it .... and there is the memory to cherish. As always masterfully expressed. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A lot of truth in this poem, especially in the end lines...Human reality, Nice poetics..... enjoyed_______ice ><> |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
mmmmmm...very enjoyed Sey.. mmmm.. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi Sy, good mornin to ya... And though I’ve touched it once or twice You cannot stay in paradise. How come? Smiles and hugs |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A wine that’s stirs with irons hot And warms the heart with megawatt. Is of Braille a taping cane? The secrets of minds inane. An ecstasies forbidden fruit A sacred song upon a lute A feeling that is so intense It leaves you standing in suspense. And though I’ve touched it once or twice You cannot stay in paradise. ============================= Recalling Eden's Adam and Eve ... even they were asked to leave.  And warms the heart with megawatt. Is of Braille a taping cane? and those are the coolest, most clever lines I will read today. We wont have to leave Shangri-la ... Randy knows the way.  *ww*    Well I cant say what I might believe ... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
*smiling* No, indeed, paradise is lost in reality. But you sure can catch me dreaming now and again! Good morning, Sy!  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Top o' the morn to you Sy! Really enjoyed today's offering, especially: "A wine that’s stirs with irons hot And warms the heart with megawatt." Classic! Thanks as always Sy Have a great day! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
To at least have touch paradise is an achievement, Sy. It is a goal well worth pursuing. Well done! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Your thoughts are so full of the morning ... drifted/sifted through dreams of the night~ A lovely read, sir poet~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely Seymour. I am serving up the tea along with muffins to-day as Enchantress is having a hospital procedure done. I know she is missing your wonderful words this morning. hugs, Chris |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Chris, if you could please give Nancy my best regards, and tell her she's in my thoughts today, I would really appreciate it I'm sure she'll do just fine Thanks Chris! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita, LOL My passion for the day. ice Thank you for the read and enjoy. Gentle Spirit Thank you for the mmmmmmm LeeJ Just because. LOL JM, If you read this go back and find Samarkand It's about 3 or 4 poems back. How are things going? WWRS Sunshine Happy you can dream. Hugs Richy Thanks for the read and the top of the morn. scorpio Thanks for the well done. Marge, Lovely comment dear poet. Hugs Chris, Have Nancy in my heart along with you. Hugs |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Maybe not. *S* But you can certainly seek a return at every opportunity! *S* I like this very much, my friend. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern That's true. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! you are really good with last lines Sy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Sy! Awesome write! Sorry I'm late... just back from having my scope. ~Afternoon hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You always write very well... and this is no exception! Grover. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you love. Nancy, Missed you sweet. Grover Thank you my friend. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And though I’ve touched it once or twice You cannot stay in paradise. Oh, but seymour, wouldn't it be nice? Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel LOL Yes it would. |
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