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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2004-02-17 04:39 PM


TWENTY OR LESS...#196

Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON


suitcase packed

clutching

door swung back

released

akwardly I walked

and felt


the final emptiness


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© Copyright 2004 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-17 04:42 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Mark, I understand that sting ever too well, dearest friend, "goodbye" should be forgotten from the English language as it is just too sad a word, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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2 posted 2004-02-17 09:56 PM


Hi Mark, good to see you too. I know this feeling, kind of uncertain and sad. Well said.
Sandra

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3 posted 2004-02-18 04:03 AM


sad stuff
MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2004-02-18 04:11 PM


Agreed, Noah...  "See you soon" is a much nicer alternative...

Sandra, there are such times that stick with you long after the "goodbye"...

Yes indeed, Dixie...

-MVS

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iliana
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5 posted 2004-02-21 12:27 PM


Mark, your picture painting is simply amazing!
MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2004-02-21 02:08 PM


iliana, I appreciate your appreciation.  Time to start thinking seriously about that book, eh?  

-MVS

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iliana
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7 posted 2004-02-23 07:45 PM


Yes, Mark, it's time!
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