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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-02-17 11:01 AM



A question hangs unspoken from
our lips.

The space between us holds no
answers.

Our fingers ache from a whispered
nearness.

We listen...

Moving closer to the answer.


© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-17 11:15 AM


Very good write! Grover.
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2004-02-17 12:19 PM


The space between us holds no
answers.


Lovely thoughts, Ericc~

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-02-18 03:56 AM


Whispered nearness

These two words hold such magic. They are the key words that lead to the LIGHT. You guide me on the way to the full immersion into divine truth that lies within.

So beautiful!

I love you. Margherita

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4 posted 2004-02-18 03:58 AM


indeed, the answer is there, waiting
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5 posted 2004-02-18 06:19 AM


Lots going on in so few words!   I enjoyed the imaginations that your open form left...
   Thought provoking.
               Sadie

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6 posted 2004-02-18 09:12 AM


Eric~

Nothing but

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-02-18 09:33 AM


Ericc
Well done, enjoyed.

Sunshine
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8 posted 2004-02-18 09:36 AM



The images in this were very clear, Eric!  
Very nice!

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9 posted 2004-02-18 05:58 PM


lovely....to share such a love -- beautiful

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

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10 posted 2004-02-18 06:15 PM


Very beautiful Eric...
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2004-02-18 07:07 PM


Ericc - you did good, very good...

BC

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12 posted 2004-02-18 09:22 PM


very nice
Suetang
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13 posted 2004-02-18 10:44 PM


Great write here Eric.  Thanks for sharing.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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14 posted 2004-02-19 12:07 PM


Eric, I hope the answer wll come soon...
and that it will be the one you want.
Hugs  
Ethel

Susan Caldwell
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15 posted 2004-02-19 12:31 PM


Yum.  
iliana
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16 posted 2004-02-21 07:51 PM


Ericc -- these last three poems are wonderful!  This was, I think, I like the best.  ......hugs to you, you talented man!
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17 posted 2004-02-22 06:14 PM




(big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Eric, as always your poetry holds such a spiritual sensuality, dearest friend, love don't need to question, it just "is", yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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