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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-02-17 03:05 AM



Cracked, chipped, used,
bitter, angry,
abused,


Broken, bent,torn,
promises, love,
forlorn,

Empty, shattered,trashed,
lies, deceit,
mashed,

Fragments,pieces,dissected,
trust, believed,
unconnected,

Destroyed,fragments,bleeding,
hurt, pain,
receeding,

Pieces,laying in mass,
once a heart,
broken glass.


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-02-17 03:12 AM


ouch...

hang in there, you'll find a good glass-blower to create something beautiful again

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2004-02-17 03:15 AM


LOL..yes or one with crazy glue....LOL

whatever..it is going to take alot of the stuff!



~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
3 posted 2004-02-17 04:04 AM


LOL, crazy glue eh?

even though you are broken, we can still gather all the pieces together for a really interesting hug!


Richy
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4 posted 2004-02-17 04:20 AM



Romantic Heart,

Just take your time, picking up all those
little pieces... and don’t cut yourself
whatever you do. It sounds like your
heart has bled enough, for one night...

I think you’ll be okay though,
just look at that big red heart of yours
up there, still beating nice and strong...

How could a heart that big, not always
be filled, with love, and romance...





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5 posted 2004-02-17 09:34 AM


RomanticHeart~
The shards in broken disarray reflect a myriad of layers~

You depict the imagery well~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Ericc
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6 posted 2004-02-17 10:50 AM


Powerful words...powerfuly expressed.

Eric

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