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lucky
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0 posted 2004-02-17 02:18 AM



where
are the dresses with
ruffled slips that floated like faery
wings of butterflies and do tell me where
have the blowing leaves gone with autumn
skies so fair almost like foreign questions
teasing minds of old recollections while
they in politely followed having lips
grave in silence of first still
of white and these
crazy

miserable
writes with company
in tight quartered houses
& kids fighting over times to
sleep times to meet a baby
staring owl surely sent by
oddity nothing you'd
quite believe but
neighbors
want to
know
sharing
in conquest
blessings flustered
tittered on a phrase natures
handed down games spring alive
from graves things disappear from
the ice box nobody knows how
still good-nights pray long
for purpose


Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


© Copyright 2004 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-17 02:23 AM


wow! Its so beautiful and its pleasing to the eye! thats true tallent there! heh...seriously though very nicely done, thought provoking definitly.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

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2 posted 2004-02-17 02:29 AM


WOW
reads like suburbia,
(not sure though)

but awesome nonetheless

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-17 03:04 AM


awesome indeed...glad you're back around
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-02-17 09:17 AM


Lucky~
I smile so gently at the beauty of your thoughts ... such a treasured pleasure to read you~

Nobody ... but NOBODY, squeezes more out of the words ... then lays them down in pleasing array~

YOU ARE a treasure~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Martie
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5 posted 2004-02-17 08:06 PM


lucky

You see inside of many things I've missed.  

Grover
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6 posted 2004-02-17 08:39 PM


Really enjoyed reading this smooth flowing poem! Grover.
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