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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the shuttered sashes of sullen souls are shut in keenness of hope as storm-filled silences rage the sounds of waters' depth in fathomed deep to wit, the clapboard covers of windowed essence seen through slits as still as crescent moons narrowly slicing the daub of life’s salient fill and replicating the pate of existent pains unwrap the dressings that bind the watch-sails deep and render the imagings that color the mind blindless portending the dreams unsought, unseen, unbound and leave the wand’ring eye to view its own |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Steavenr -- Brillian, as always, and to the vault for preservation! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I read this three times...awesome! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am so glad I found this, what a great piece of poetry, especially liked the last verse.. unwrap the dressings that bind the watch-sails deep and render the imagings that color the mind blindless portending the dreams unsought, unseen, unbound and leave the wand’ring eye to view its own Most excellent Sir~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Wonderful write here Steaven! Great Message!  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful writing, steaven. So much talent you are blessed with.  Hugs  Ethel |
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