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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-02-17 12:01 PM


i
consumed
by irrational idea
to become
a thing
a new.

a new
realization
of not
to be
true
yes.


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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
1 posted 2004-02-17 12:04 PM


"a new
realization
of not
to be
true
yes."
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i read this in so many ways, befitting to my own eyes...and in that i relate...even if in vague ways. which means i enjoyed this

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-02-17 01:57 AM


where have you been? You've been missed!
pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
3 posted 2004-02-17 03:00 AM


thx, but didn't feel like writing or reading poetry for awhile ( until tonight when this little thing hit me)
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4 posted 2004-02-18 09:48 AM


It's good to see you back! *S* I like this!
Kazm
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5 posted 2004-02-18 06:54 PM


I like this strange poem. From now on I will look for yours, not that I am able to be here very much. When I am, I will look.

                                                 Kaz

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