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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-02-16 09:30 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

Our passion starts to burn
As we lay beside the fire
Just like a master craftsman
You've unlocked my deep desire

As my heartbeat starts to quicken
You trace my body with your finger
Upon my upturned mouth
Is where you always linger

Sweat moves down my body
Over every curve and mound
You find the centre of my pleasure
While from my lips escapes a sound

We rock the world's foundations
In our moment of ecstasy
As I surrender to your charms
And let your love envelop me

I feel your love flow through me
Like a gentle warm cascade
And in the afterglow of love
Your love remains inlaid

We lay here in all our glory
Amongst the remnants of our pleasure
I have so much love for you
That I am unable to measure

Love will come again
In the early hours of dawn
As I awaken to your touch
And once again I am reborn

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2004-02-16 09:58 PM


"Sweat moves down my body
Over every curve and mound
You find the centre of my pleasure
While from my lips escapes a sound"
              
BRB, have to take a cold shower after reading this one...lol

Very nice sensual, romantic poem
enjoyed
_________ice
  ><>

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-02-16 10:19 PM


Sue -- another gorgeous love poem from you!  Must be love!  ......hugs, jo
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2004-02-16 10:38 PM


Anyone who knows me even a tad will know that I was sure to enjoy this little treat.  Very sensual and done in a way that provokes thought enough to burn the wick twice.  Lovely read with a very smooth flow about it.  I truely enjoyed this one thoroughly.
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-02-17 03:34 AM


Sue,

You are hot woman....shew!!!! very passionate...makes we sit here in want and need of that kind of pleasure and love...

great poetry as usual!

~ARH
love and hugs


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-02-17 03:56 AM


very sensual...wonderfully done!
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2004-02-17 09:36 AM


OhSue~
The fires of Passion burn brightly~

This is sensually beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-02-17 10:49 AM


A beautiful captured moment!

Eric

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