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Waiting For You W/Nightshade
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Waiting For You W/Nightshade |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
The velvet curtains of another night, Obscure my optimistic view Steal away heart's anticipate That I might spend some time with you. Yes,I will be waiting for you To arrive, Please come in the summer's rain, I want to spent another night with you. I will be waiting for you, Dawn of day reveals love's hope Broken promises fades with light, Perhaps this time our lips will meet Two souls circle and take flight, I will be waiting for you, Let the weather change into dusty wind, and would wait for you Untill the dawn, I will wait for you. Counting moments,counting breathes Until your smile brings happiness~ [This message has been edited by vandana (02-16-2004 10:28 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bravo! A beautiful duet you two! This is an absolutely amazing blending of words from two of Passions finest. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very nice  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I would like to take this opportunity to thank vandana for asking me to try a duet with her. She is one very nice lady. Hugs!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done to both, well written of an age old malady...the love and the wait. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! looking forward to more! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is full of anticipation, so well expressed. My compliments to both sweet poet ladies. Lovely! Love, Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent!! Eric |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Good write... Grover. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You two are lovely here! The wait never sounded so beautifully, truly. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyMy ... Ladies~ This is delicately lovely~ Such a soft blend of thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel group hug) Awwwwwwwww, I love this beautiful duet, sweet friends, yay, the colors of your poetic hearts come together and paint such an emotional masterpiece, God Bless You Both, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Vandana and Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Vandana -- this was really lovely work! ......jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, ladies... Wonderful work! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
BRAVA! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You are all so kind. Vandana is probably at work and hasn't been able to respond. But, I am sure she is grateful for all of your comments. hugs, Chris |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - nice write with longing thoughts... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana This was a good read, enjoyed. |
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