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Grover
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0 posted 2004-02-16 12:30 PM



Been There

Ghost ship sails the sea.
Night is here and all decks
Are manned. Cannon is loaded:
The drugged and
The dead are awakened--
Then put to sleep once again.

©2004 Grover Gall

© Copyright 2004 Grover Gall - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-02-16 12:53 PM


sounds a little bit like life
Richy
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2 posted 2004-02-16 06:00 PM





That was amazing Grover!

Sure seems just like that sometimes


Much Enjoyed!

Richy


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3 posted 2004-02-16 06:05 PM


Grover,  you do have a way of saying a lot
with so little, well done.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-02-24 05:01 PM


Grover, they are right...you did say a lot
in such a few words.

I just looked at your website. I really like your poems.
They are awesome. I also went to the Christian link
you have there. I really like that, too. I found
a lot of great things there.
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2004-02-24 07:53 PM


Grover, I enjoyed this and believe me, it feels like my life somedays!  

Hugs, Marti

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