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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Stop I stop to watch the birds fly bye I hold each flower to smell and sigh I fawn beneath the dew of dawn And breathe the air of early morn I walk the path the day presents With open mind and am content To follow odors of my nose To touch the petal of a rose I read the symbols nature writes Most are tinged with soft delight Some are doffed beyond my care The filigree of my aware We all play God unto our self Some times a pixy sometimes an elf Our mind a cosmos round a bend Horizons that will never end I watch the birds and smell the morn Each day I see a bright new dawn. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You have the secret of happines there, Sy. Appreciate the small beauties of life and treat each morning with a pleasurable smile. Big things take care of themselves and we have little control over the outcomes - the small things so many people overlook is where the real beauty lies. Nicely said, pardner  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Your philosophy strikes a cord with me Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
I love the special time of early morning in any season, in any setting. It is filled with such hope... presents to us a blank canvas for us to paint another picture for our lives. I love reading your poems and the style of your writing. Thank you. Youngatheart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sy..dawn most surely is the most beautiful time of day. You have captured what is special, pure and good. Have time for a cup of tea? ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
seymour~ 'The filigree of my aware' Oh dear man ... within the filigree of your aware is the poetry that I'm so glad you share~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read the symbols nature writes Most are tinged with soft delight Some are doffed beyond my care The filigree of my aware ~*~ I do believe your filigree are what I would call my morninglory vines... Good morning, Sy... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This echoes beautifully in my heart, dear Seymour. You have a wonderful connection to Nature and its source. Guess, I stop too .... This is an exquisite write. Love, Margherita  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And that is why the candles on your cake contradict your youth... and why your wise words give us such beautiful truth... Excellent philosophy AND work, my friend! *S* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good, sweet mornin' to you, Seymour, and thank you for the lovely poem today! Have a great one! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a great way to start my day! Thanks for the write! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, I agree totally agree in what you say. The most delightful things are of nature, things to plunge our senses into... Much enjoyed, ~Sadelite~ |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
that's the way to live beautiful, sir... Good to read you. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I fawn beneath the dew of dawn ~~~ Some are doffed beyond my care The filigree of my aware ~~~~ Our mind a cosmos round a bend Horizons that will never end ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Im smiling at you for those way cool lines of wit and wisdom Sy-babers... Your poetry is a daily stop and smell the Sy-wise-rhymes for most of us  thats cuz you are our King of Cool.  *ww*  Well I cant say what I might believe ... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thats a very beautiful way to look at life Sy I wish I had your inner peace Thanks, this was great! Richy |
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