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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Continue to write until accepted only to appear where unexpected... must purge myself with unproductive thoughts cringe at prospects of an eventual onslaught of writer's block a warning clock or bells that'll clang in my head to announce enough's been said.. I am man made not to question too much or to figure out why life costs to touch but I have to succeed in what I do... how the ambition came, haven't a clue. Will continue to write and set an example express thoughts from the narrow to ample with the gift of an articulate tongue I live to breathe from more than a lung.. An air of creative spirit runs in my veins relish to see how I jostle refrains, continue to write until accepted appear in the limelight when unexpected. [This message has been edited by wordwizard (02-16-2004 11:54 AM).] |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
"figure out why life costs to touch" Very much like that line Keep thy pen to the paper "Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so that's how it works...yeah |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Will continue to write and set an example express thoughts from the narrow to ample with the gift of an articulate tongue I live to breathe from more than a lung.. ~*~ Amen. This particular stanza has a double meaning for me, Sir...so may I mark it and the all of the poem, a  |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Death, Eventually your name is considered as a welcome relief from the reality that abounds.. Karilea,Passing Shadows glad you liked this, added an extra stanza |
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