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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-02-16 12:54 PM

wisking blue,
ocean floor, sand too.
Diamond studded stars up high.
Dropping down upon my mind.

A spiteful game,
it seems so well tuned.
silent: a game fit for two
peek a boo

I see you,
waltzing down,
memory lane.

I'm stranded here,
on the highway of emotional demolition.
Grieving the painless tears,
that tear open my soul, one scratch a time.

A moment true,
walking amongst the blue.
But I know its gonna be so hard,
without you.

A spiteful game,
it seems so much in tune.
silent: a game fit for me and you.
peek a boo
: A loving memory of GMC: and a huge hug to Larry.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

Death
Member

since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

1 posted 2004-02-16 03:02 AM

" A spiteful game"
How often that is such an accurate description of near all human relations.
Harken to brighter days ahead will shine through.

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2004-02-16 05:41 PM

It always is hard walking without the other...
It hurts more,
aches unbearably.
But taking it one scratch at a time helps.
This is good...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-02-16 05:46 PM

Kellie -- terrific writing! Good for you! (Despite the sadness I feel with it)

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2004-02-17 07:02 PM

Excellent timing Kellie,
Ginger's birthday would be Thursday, February 19, and she would have been thity. And what a wonderful poem. I'm extremely impressed and touched by this writing. You fed my soul today. Thanks for the email card. Very well done dear girl. Bless you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

5 posted 2004-02-18 08:01 PM

Kellie- This is absolutely oustanding. Great Job.

But now the animal is in pain...
And now it's starting to rain...
But I'm still the same.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2004-02-18 08:54 PM

Wonderful way of putting it in words, my friend...I applaud you.

jwesley

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