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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR 
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Have you ever been so confused, You do not know where you belong? Have you ever thought, That you were the one wrong? What if everyone in the world was the same? Would there be anyone to blame? What if, You could change everything that you did wrong? Would the world be perfect? Would you then be somewhere you belong? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A thought provoking piece, a topic which I have pondered on many times. Thanx for expressing it, makes one stop and think for a while. |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
Striking the universal theme "what if I had taken a different path, here and there in the wanderings of life. Well done "Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You ask profound questions. My answer when I ask myself this is with another question: How would I have ever learned if not by my error? Enjoyed your work here. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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