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S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2004-02-15 06:23 PM


beyond Valentines


  
I see you in black between the white lines
     of a long night ride
          - a surface that I glide
and in the ink that spatters here
     onto waiting blank pages
          - a fire that rages

I search for you in this pixel array
     of an energized view
          - the two dimensions of you
and reach for the unknown depths
     of your sweet-water well
          - a long thirst I will quell






©   021504


© Copyright 2004 S Arthur Grey - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2004-02-15 06:29 PM


Kool write, my friend ... really enjoyed the read.

jwesley

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-02-15 06:29 PM


Very nicely penned and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Martie
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3 posted 2004-02-15 06:40 PM


SAG

Softly romantic, this.  Enjoyed!

muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
4 posted 2004-02-15 06:43 PM


oh this is nice!
...a dancing love across the binary code...

very much enjoyed this

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-02-15 06:46 PM


S Arthur Grey
Excellent, enjoyed the read.

iliana
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6 posted 2004-02-15 11:28 PM


Yes, this was certainly woven by a poet's loom!
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-02-16 03:24 AM


lucky one you wrote this for
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2004-02-16 03:46 AM


Stir

come to me
this night
and I shall
stir you
one step
closer to
liquid dreams

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2004-02-16 09:48 PM


SArthurGrey~
Oh ... this is rich~

Following OneSlick's footprints is a good thing to do~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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