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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-02-15 05:17 PM

In my ears I can hear the song of ages past,
your breath as a sensation travels to my heart,
extracting on the way emotion of my soul
to filter through my eyes the passion you inspire.

With love your energy fine tuned and now refined
encircles every cloud as if you’re there inside
but from a distance far away is where you keep vigil
and oversee construction of perfect harmony.

One, two, three, in stages on and we refuse to see
old must go before the new arises from deep sleep
and builds again from start to end towers of pure faith
in how a master formulates his plan for mother earth.

And as I feel your pain emanating from my birth
into a lifetime I’ve decreed to be of little worth
I too would slink away to shadows of dismay
not only for a night but until the change complete.

Now I lay me down to sleep,
tread carefully lest I wake to weep!

Helen

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-02-15 05:23 PM

And as I feel your pain emanating from my birth
into a lifetime I’ve decreed to be of little worth
I too would slink away to shadows of dismay
not only for a night but until the change complete.

Now I lay me down to sleep,
tread carefully lest I wake to weep!
Hugs

Ethel
This is a beautiful write.
Thanks for sharing.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2004-02-15 05:27 PM

Thanks, Ethel. And now I am going to grab hold of the elusive thing called "sleep".

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-02-15 05:31 PM

Lots of good imagery here! (And as I feel your pain emanating from my birth) Grover.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2004-02-15 06:48 PM

I agree ... beautiful write . . .

jwesley

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-02-15 06:52 PM

Helen
A good write, enjoyed the read.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-02-15 09:43 PM

Honeybunch -- what a deeply moving write this is. hugs.....jo

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2004-02-15 11:28 PM

Thank you all so much for your kind responses. I slept, and perhaps am sleeping still in denial of these present times.

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