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Open Poetry #31

A Certain Attraction

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-02-15 04:50 PM

A Certain Attraction

I liked her smile.
I liked her serious look too.
She had a certain
attraction to her.
I knew we'd kiss
before the night
was through.

JamesLee
February14
2004
We did.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-15 05:01 PM

Hope the kiss wasn't as brief as the poem! Enjoyed this! Grover.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

2 posted 2004-02-15 06:06 PM

And she knew too.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-02-15 06:13 PM

So much said in so few words.

Much enjoyed James.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2004-02-15 06:40 PM

not to make light of your write here James - well done and one on the mark as yours always are - but I think a kiss before the night is through is almost a given - especially now-a-days...the fun, the enticement to me was to always make it wait a day, two maybe, or longer when the kiss was real - but then I was always a romantic -not a thing of the moment, so I guess I usually missed the "moments" you portrayed here - my loss, your gain I guess.

Enjoyed, as usual...

jwesley

passing shadows
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