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Enigma |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There shall marshal roughed edges, haunting brisk winds patron Blown in on a new season, a door opens to thriving seedlings taken shelter Could there be more hope, more inspiration…more light? Truly peeking from the frost lines of an endless tan… Tantalizing spirits to be born again into the free of innocence Sloughing off the peelings of a deadened hearted winter But the sift of full bloom whispered to the forest floor And rising yet again to peer so humbly at first…yet thirst calls Beckon to the treetops to spit the buds of tomorrow to the sun Like orange seeds from a child’s giggling smile And grow…grow into the skies of finger paint and sponge Cake yellow…sleepy eyed to sunsets of fullest mellow Conjuring gems to sparkle in darkness of a spring night A Huron’s flight…into the parchment of a new day Sent away, the returning to be measured Astonished Copyright kkh 2/15/04 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You carry with you a bag filled with images and metaphors that I wish I had about half of...Let's see, anything else I need to mention? Nope...astonished am I... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Lots of great examples of good images (Cake yellow…sleepy eyed to sunsets of fullest mellow)! Grover. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen once again you astound me with a very beautiful write.. ...full of magical imagery. Wonderful write. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, another beautiful painting from your pen. very beautiful is this!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
truly enjoyed seeing what you see, my friend. Wonderful words and write... jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond A very good write, enjoyed. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
"Truly peeking from the frost lines of an endless tan…" Interesting . . . . . . a line that would not have occurred to me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'the sift of full bloom whispered to the forest floor' And you heard it all, sweeping it into this beauty of a write~ Again ... you rise ... creme dela creme~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
“Truly peeking from the frost lines of an endless tan…” “And grow…grow into the skies of finger paint and sponge” Such beautiful writing TD! You always amaze me!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Truly peeking from the frost lines of an endless tan… Kathleen~ You are a poetess of everlasting images, and truly a delight in every sense of the word. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
And this is astonishing, as well! Brilliant portrait! |
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