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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-02-15 11:52 AM


One last write,
Then I'm out of sight.
Adios.
One last bit of me,
Then off to the one I see.
Adios.
One more oddball post,
Then to the one I long most.
Adios.
One more little thing,
Then off with angels to sing.
Adios.
So to all the wonderful people here at PIP,
It's time I said goodbye and take a trip.
Adios.

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Nightshade
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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
1 posted 2004-02-15 01:03 PM


Adios dear poet. Have a good trip and come back soon! Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-02-15 01:06 PM


You will be missed...
We'll keep the porch light on for you..
Come back soon!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-02-15 01:07 PM


wishing you would not go, but understanding

have a good trip, look us up if you're ever over in these parts again

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2004-02-15 02:07 PM


Off with Angels to sing

Adios, for just a while.
Adios has always a melancholic touch to it, but you are headed to LOVE, then it's all right.

Love, Margherita

Hockeychick19
Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA
5 posted 2004-02-15 02:13 PM


You will be missed

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
6 posted 2004-02-15 02:31 PM


Well, at least you're saying good-bye! Grover.
Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
7 posted 2004-02-15 09:09 PM


if i get a chance to ill be back to see whats goin on, just dont know when the chance will arise but no worries ill return one of these days :P probably have some odd piece to put up when i do...thanks bunches you guys its been fun

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
8 posted 2004-02-17 11:37 AM


You know you can always come home...hugs kiddo...love ya
Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
9 posted 2004-02-17 04:19 PM


yes mother i know i can come home :P well come see ya when we get a chance dont worry well either come down over spring break or in the summer and stay a couple weeks if we can but well come see ya i promise :P love ya too

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

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