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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-02-15 10:13 AM



crumbling
around me
walls
feelings
desires
chipped away
fragments of
turning to powder
decomposing
of words
of thoughts
disjointed
separating
till
at odds
and
divorced
from all
that matters

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-02-15 10:16 AM


Oh, no, Maureen, I hope you don't feel really like this.
You write so powerfully.
Things and people that matter are powerful too and will surface again in your heart.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-02-15 10:36 AM


Maureen,
A clever sad write.

Magnus
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3 posted 2004-02-15 12:06 PM


Yes M.,  you do write so powerfully and one
can only hope that your life does not endure
these trials ...to this degree.

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-02-15 01:38 PM


MzWynter~

Such beauty cannot be broken
for the Spirit that lies within
will soar once more on wings of adore
lifting you higher than you've ever been~

*Huglets* to you~
Dear friend ... I love you~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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