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Open Poetry #31

Her Beauty

David2
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2004-02-15 09:10 AM

Her Beauty

Beauty and grace but a joy to behold,
Every delicate china like feature,
Kept from her side does my heart soon grow cold,
As my only desire is to reach her.
Face of an angel, sweet eyes of a child,
With one touch of her lips I surrender.
Passions unbridled run senselessly wild
As I melt when exposed to her splendor.
Stunning mysenses with only her smile,
She has captured ,enraptured me wholly,
Virginal innocence sheltered from trial,
And I offer my love to her solely.

Beauty so peerless so simple so pure,
Spirit so sweet and so softly demure.

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-02-15 09:13 AM

very nice, sweet and sensual...

Youngatheart
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since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

2 posted 2004-02-15 09:14 AM

David, this reads so smoothly and I can tell it was easy for you to write...right from your heart and soul....a keeper for me.
Thank you for a romantic read this morning.
Youngatheart

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-02-15 09:18 AM

Softly sensual...veery very nicely done.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-02-15 09:23 AM

This is full of harmony and shows beautifully your deep devotion.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-02-15 04:39 PM

Enjoyed...James

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-02-15 05:42 PM

Very nice read! Grover.

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

7 posted 2004-02-15 05:45 PM

A pleasure!

Thank you.

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