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choshi
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since 2004-01-01

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New York

0 posted 2004-02-15 02:28 AM

Irvington, February 14, 2004*

How soon the sky fades
from dusk's red blaze to darkness,
as stars rise-
my heart rages with passion,
charred as winter's night draws near.

~P

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2004-02-15 03:44 AM

this is utterly stunning! thank you Paul

muted

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2 posted 2004-02-15 04:16 AM

passionate, hot and steamy!
very nice write Paul...youre sizzlin' today!

choshi
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Posts 1184
New York

3 posted 2004-02-15 04:17 AM

this is utterly stunning! thank you Paul

Thank you Dixie......~P

choshi
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New York

4 posted 2004-02-15 04:25 AM

passionate, hot and steamy!
very nice write Paul...youre sizzlin' today!

Awww, Thank you Dawn....You bet!!! I see your passions raging as well...

~P

Youngatheart
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since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

5 posted 2004-02-15 06:47 AM

Glorious write and photo of a sunset.
I have been noticing the gorgeous skies in the mornings here lately. My daughter took a picture the other day that looked very similar to this one. aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh....what lovely miracles we can find in nature when we stopped to notice them. Youngster

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2004-02-15 07:53 AM

Hi Youngster,

So true what you say: ".......what lovely miracles we can find in nature when we stopped to notice them."

It takes less than a moment to look around us or up at the sky and to be filled with wonder....~P

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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7 posted 2004-02-15 09:25 AM

How soon the sky fades
from dusk's red blaze to darkness,
as stars rise-
my heart rages with passion,
charred as winter's night draws near.

~P

the sun bleeds the day
to the tourniquet of sky
moon on the meadow
i awoke just to die

and a happy hearts to u 2 paulie

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2004-02-15 09:52 AM

Wow, just the picture made me pause in awe .... and the passionate words actually are so harmoniously added that I must say ... this is breathtaking.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-02-15 09:54 AM

choshi
The wonder of passions eyes, enjoyed.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2004-02-15 09:54 AM

Paul~

Very peaceful....and such a stunning picture....

Lauren~

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-02-15 10:45 AM

the sun bleeds the day
to the tourniquet of sky
moon on the meadow
i awoke just to die

~~~~~<@>~~~~

Upon waking,
is that dreams that die away?
Waning crescent moon-
lights the ice flows in dawn's sky;
this wide-awake dream called life.

and a happy hearts to u 2 paulie

Ditto

choshi
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Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2004-02-15 10:46 AM

... this is breathtaking.
Love, Margherita

Awww thank you Margherita.....

~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

13 posted 2004-02-15 10:46 AM

choshi
The wonder of passions eyes, enjoyed.

Thank you Sy, glad you enjoyed...

~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

14 posted 2004-02-15 10:48 AM

Very peaceful....and such a stunning picture....

Lauren~

Thank you Lauren, Glad you felt the peacefulness...there is something quieting about the sunset......

~P

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