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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2004-02-14 06:42 PM



Sweet, Turtle Dove, enamored
I sing my love so powerful,
so true. You are a Rose, an arrow
shot clear through my heart.
Your honeyed words drip down
and cover my soul. I dance
in the rhythmic beat of love's song.
Come, be my gentle Dove. Soar
with me to far beyond, to love's
eternal skies. Lover of my dreams,
lay beside me. While I stroke
your silken curls. My fingers
playing a tune of their own...touching,
sending pulsing messages, electricity
through the very core of your being.
All the while, enamored I sing
a Valentine ballad to you. With each
new beat, with each new arrow shot

a rose goes straight
~~~through my heart.


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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2004-02-14 10:51 PM


Hello Ivy Rose

This was so very beautiful and I am surprised that I am the first to comment on such a lovely piece of writing.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2004-02-14 10:54 PM


I agree, absolutely beautiful, my friend.

jwesley

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2004-02-15 09:31 AM


Ivy Rose, this is a soft romantic poem and I enjoyed every word of it.
You touched my heart.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-02-15 09:38 AM


Ivy Rose
Lovely, just lovely.

Magnus
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5 posted 2004-02-15 12:16 PM


Ivy,  you write of love so passionately,
beautifully and elegantly...

garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-02-15 08:26 PM


Ivy, this is so beautiful. I'm glad
that I didn't miss reading it.
Hugs  
Ethel

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
7 posted 2004-02-15 11:23 PM


IvyRose, what a beautiful valentine this is!
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