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Martie
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0 posted 2004-02-14 12:45 PM



With Frangipani
the air is full

sky clad in silk
I take steps into you

moving past the lie of reason
into truth


© Copyright 2004 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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1 posted 2004-02-14 01:59 PM


here you go again - touching all those senses and sending thoughts deep inside me - loved this Martie - Paul
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2 posted 2004-02-14 02:01 PM




Beautiful. Beyond reason truth is found.
Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2004-02-14 02:01 PM


"moving past the lie of reason
into truth"

Wow!!

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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4 posted 2004-02-14 02:08 PM


I have a candle of this fragrance. Lovely, strong but delicate to the senses.
Bon-Bon

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5 posted 2004-02-14 05:56 PM




Whew! I don’t know Martie,
this one really got me!

I hope your having the most
wonderful day today,  and that
it continues throughout...

When the evening belongs to
you and yours, an no one else...




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6 posted 2004-02-14 06:08 PM


Martie-- an all encompassing, word-economical wizard with this! Grover.
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7 posted 2004-02-14 06:21 PM


Awesome! Happy Valentine's Day dear lady.
hugs, Chris

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8 posted 2004-02-14 08:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautifully romantic! (kiss on cheek) Happy Valentines Day, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!





May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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9 posted 2004-02-14 10:02 PM


this is...sooo..very nice

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10 posted 2004-02-14 10:19 PM


Martie, you write THE most incredible poems! This one knocked me over.

Beautiful, just beautiful ....

Hugs, Marti

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11 posted 2004-02-14 10:23 PM


Martie, this is one of shortest I've read of yours, but on of the greatest.

jwesley

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12 posted 2004-02-14 11:48 PM


Beautiful!!!!
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13 posted 2004-02-15 03:01 PM


moving past the lie of reason
into truth


Wow Martie... what a GREAT line.
What a GREAT poetess.

M

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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14 posted 2004-02-15 05:11 PM


Enjoyed...James
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15 posted 2004-02-15 05:47 PM


Frangipani and truth go well together!
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16 posted 2004-02-15 05:54 PM


MartieSis~
So beautifully scented in the fragrance of you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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17 posted 2004-02-15 07:08 PM


sky clad in silk

That's enough to move the reader,  ever so gently.
Much enjoyed your short form Martie~

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18 posted 2004-02-15 08:58 PM


frilly panties?  What?  frangipani...oh,
like I,  (the male)(non florist type) is
supposed to know.

Great message Martie..

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19 posted 2004-02-15 09:34 PM


Marti, you have spun silken threads into a beautiful statement once again.  Enjoyed!
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20 posted 2004-02-16 11:24 AM


One of my favorite flowers... *S*

Beautiful!

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21 posted 2004-02-16 09:27 PM



ing with the biggest

Martie knows why~

LOVE YOU SISTER~
*Huglets*
~*Me

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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22 posted 2004-02-16 09:39 PM


Wow Martie such a wonderful inscription to cast eyes upon.
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23 posted 2004-02-16 09:47 PM


A poem as sweet to mind taste as the Plumeria to the nose...love its brevity, yet it delivers a big story...
enjoyed
_______ice
  ><>

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24 posted 2004-02-20 02:24 PM


And that is a good place to be. I remember the first time I smelled that scent...a rainy day in Hawaii, and a simple blossom...then a tree of them.

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