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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

0 posted 2004-02-14 10:57 AM

*

Was there a beginning
to our story, my Love?
Or were we just part
of Love’s essence?
Of the one element
that has always been?

Manifestation took place
within our souls.
In the subtle realms
of our existence
we touched upon
each other’s core.

Then awareness dawned
of love’s magical dance.
Divine tunes carried us
to untold ethereal heights.
Twirling through the vastness
of eternity we sing our song.

In moments of passion
all instruments explode as one,
touching the peak of perception
of our melting selves.
A single piano note expands
to share our yearning with Universe.

In love’s embrace we glow,
we are never far from the Light,
in fragile moments of sorrow
we reach out to the Source of All
to quench our thirst in the heavens above,
and once more we spread our wings of love.

Come, dance with me, my Love.
Come, fly with me, my Love.
Come, be with me, my Love.
Come, sing with me, my Love.
Come, merge with me, my Love.
Come, glow with me, my Love.
Come!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-02-14 11:17 AM

Margherita
You convinced me, I'll be right there.
Lovely, lovely write.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-02-14 12:00 PM

how romantic and beautiful!
~Sadelite~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-02-14 12:09 PM

Oh, Margherita, this is so beautiful!
Hugs and Happy Valentines Day!!
Ethel

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-02-14 12:09 PM

Beautiful! For Valentine's or any time.
Love the closing stanza!
Huga~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-02-14 01:18 PM

i love the dance youve choreographed here, simply esquisite

Margherita
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Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2004-02-15 05:11 AM

Thank you dear Seymour, Ethel, Nancy and Michelle for stopping by and lovingly commenting. May you all enjoy your own love's dance and be happy with it.
Love and hugs. Margherita

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-02-15 08:52 AM

Margherita~
Oh my ... you pen with waltzing ink~
Lovely sweet poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
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Eternity

8 posted 2004-02-15 08:57 AM

Thank you dear Marge, for your loving words! It's your gift on my 3000th post!
Love and hugs. Margherita

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

9 posted 2004-02-15 09:01 AM

Ohhh yes , love embraced in the glow
this was so beautiful I could sense the hearts romantic flow

Hope

Youngatheart
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since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

10 posted 2004-02-15 09:08 AM

In love’s embrace we glow,
we are never far from the Light,
in fragile moments of sorrow
we reach out to the Source of All
to quench our thirst in the heavens above,
and once more we spread our wings of love.

Come, dance with me, my Love.
Come, fly with me, my Love.
Come, be with me, my Love.
Come, sing with me, my Love.
Come, merge with me, my Love.
Come, glow with me, my Love.
Come!

This poem is OUTSTANDING. I wish I had written it for someone special. A++++++++++

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

11 posted 2004-02-15 09:21 AM

this is sexy, passionate, music for the eyes!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

12 posted 2004-02-15 09:30 AM

There are always beginnings, Margherita. And I always feel glad when I see one of yours. Congratulations, too, on your 3,000th post!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

13 posted 2004-02-15 09:35 AM

Dear Hope, Youngatheart, muted and Sunshine-Karilea, thank you for your loving comments. Yes, the beginnings we do remember, but sometimes we wonder if it had all been since forever and just came into manifestation at that certain moment of life.
Have a wonderful Sunday dear poet friends.
Love, Margherita

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

14 posted 2004-02-15 09:46 AM

Wonderful write. The words dance off the page.

believe in what your heart feels...

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2004-02-15 09:50 AM

Come, dance with me, my Love.
Come, fly with me, my Love.
Come, be with me, my Love.
Come, sing with me, my Love.
Come, merge with me, my Love.
Come, glow with me, my Love'''

really beautiful...just the emotion from this...you have a touching way of writing....hugssss

Lauren~

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

16 posted 2004-02-15 11:27 AM

Lovely, Margherita!

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

17 posted 2004-02-15 11:37 AM

Exquisite... fabulous write! Grover.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2004-02-15 12:36 PM

Laughing at SY...elegant write, a nice
weave...

wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

19 posted 2004-02-15 12:38 PM

nicely composed Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

20 posted 2004-02-15 12:58 PM

oooooooo! that's pretty!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

21 posted 2004-02-15 01:09 PM

Beautifully written Margherita! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

22 posted 2004-02-15 01:10 PM

Dear Scorpio, Greeneyes, Honeybunch, Grover, Magnus, wordwizard and Dixie thank you all for your kind and generous comments.
Have a wonderful Sunday all, dear Poet friends.
Love, Margherita

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

23 posted 2004-02-15 01:12 PM

Hugs to you too, dear Chris. So nice to find you here.
Love, Margherita

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

24 posted 2004-02-15 01:43 PM

Margherita

What a beautiful love poem!!

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

25 posted 2004-02-15 02:29 PM

I must join the crowd and applaud this..
Well done, a most enjoyable read....I must say I felt very warm after reading it, must be I put to much wood on the fire of my senses......

_______ice
><>

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

26 posted 2004-02-15 02:38 PM

Margherita...very romantic indeed.

M

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

27 posted 2004-02-16 06:34 AM

Margherita...A beautiful and passion-filled poem of love. ***Ivy Rose

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

28 posted 2004-02-16 08:59 AM

Words like thse will keep your dance card filled...Romantic and sensual poetry, Margharita...

love this> Where the cosmos are considered

"Twirling through the vastness
of eternity we sing our song."

And this, where the poem enters the realities of earth..

"In moments of passion
all instruments explode as one,
touching the peak of perception
of our melting selves."

A climatic ending anchors the poem...

"Come, merge with me, my Love.
Come, glow with me, my Love.
Come!"

Thats the way I read it anyway..

enjoyed
_________ice
><>

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

29 posted 2004-02-16 06:15 PM

In moments of passion
all instruments explode as one,
touching the peak of perception
of our melting selves.
A single piano note expands
to share our yearning with Universe.

In love’s embrace we glow,
we are never far from the Light,
in fragile moments of sorrow
we reach out to the Source of All
to quench our thirst in the heavens above,
and once more we spread our wings of love.

Come, dance with me, my Love.
Come, fly with me, my Love.
Come, be with me, my Love.
Come, sing with me, my Love.
Come, merge with me, my Love.
Come, glow with me, my Love.
Come!

Margherita, this is enchanting!

What a wonderful writer you are!

And what a wonderful heart
you must have

Simply Fabulous!

I don’t know how I missed this

Richy

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

30 posted 2004-02-16 06:22 PM

loved it

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

31 posted 2004-02-17 07:04 AM

Dear poet friends, Martie, Ice, Dark Angel, Ivy Rose, Richy and Vandana, thank you from my heart for reading and for your very kind and very generous comments on this “Love's Dance”. I am touched and ... I blushed!

Have a wonderful week all.
Love, Margherita

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

32 posted 2004-02-17 10:53 AM

A beautiful, beautiful dance.

Love,
Eric

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