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Kicking Kim
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Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2004-02-14 09:27 AM


A bath from heaven
drowning depression
with every drop.
And then you shine
in the sunlight
painting a rainbow of colour
onto our darkened faces.
We splash.
We dance.
We smile.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

© Copyright 2004 Kimberley Mason - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-02-14 09:38 AM


Kicking Kim
And we are happy, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-02-14 02:40 PM


but after four days, I am ready for rest and sunshine
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-02-15 04:40 PM


Very nice...James
Grover
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4 posted 2004-02-15 05:35 PM


Uplifting! Grover.
S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom
5 posted 2004-02-15 05:40 PM



Kicking Kim
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Cloud Cucko Land!
6 posted 2004-02-21 05:33 AM


Thankyou for the responses, I really appreciate every comment.

  ^*Kim*^  


"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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7 posted 2004-02-21 11:44 AM


Kimberley~
Now this is just a lovely word *gift*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 2004-02-21 01:16 PM




(does happy puddle dance) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo adorable, yay, "we're singing in the rain, we're singing in the rain!" (smiles) God Bless You, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kimberly, tank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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9 posted 2004-02-21 01:28 PM


A very pleasing ending and heartfelt write Kim, Wonderful job!!
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