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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
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0 posted 2004-02-14 09:23 AM




From Picture It


A Box of Surprises

Today a box of chocolate covered rainbows are coming your way.
This box is wrapped in shiny paper with multicolored ribbons
and
hidden within the layers are
sugary surprises and pleasant delights.
Inside are marshmallow skies and sunny lemon creams.
Candy kisses
jump from the box and kiss you tenderly while the
delectable chocolate caresses your waiting tongue
and
sends a message to your brain-
This has to be a sweet box of heavenly delights.
As you dig a little deeper,
on the layer next to the bottom,
is a layer of sugary hearts.
One says, I Love You, another says,Be Mine.
Going one more layer
a large chocolate candy bar saying in big bold letters
are the words you love to see and these words are
I love you my darling
Please say you’ll be mine
From the one that loves you
Me.

Love Bon-Bon


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
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1 posted 2004-02-14 11:11 AM


Surprises sweetly told!
Yes you are right, first of all, we have to spoil ourselves .... with love.
Love, Margherita

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-02-14 12:03 PM


sure were a lot of calories in that sweetly wrapped box!  Enjoyed
              ~Sadelite~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-02-14 12:08 PM


Have a wonderful Valentine's Day Bonnie!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-02-14 12:08 PM


What a beautiful Valentine this is!!
I know that he loves it.
Hugs and Happy Valentines Day!!
Ethel
  

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