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With My Eyes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WITH MY EYES” by Bill Charles ~~~~ There are moments when you sleep during the night and soft moonbeams enter inside this room to caress your being, and I am in wonderment of the beauty I see with my eyes… There are moments when your eyes open and sparkle with the light as it dances upon your face, and I am in wonderment of the beauty I see with my eyes… There are moments when you look at me in caring and smile before you again close your eyes as lips touch in tenderness, and I am in wonderment of the beauty I see with my eyes… Then when the moonbeams leave on their silent journey your face disappears into the shadows of darkness and you peacefully sleep once again, yet I can still see through the dim, and I’m still in wonderment of the beauty I have seen with my eyes… ~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill Then believe your eyes, good one, enjoyed. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
What a warm poem you have written here. My eyes see the tenderness in each and every word. Now to your reply on Little Red Book. Oh you poor innocent. LOL Life would be infinitely happier if we could only be born at the age of 80 and gradually approach 18. The three stages of getting ill; ill, pill, bill. I don't feel 80. In fact, I don't feel anything till noon.Then it's time for a nap. Have you had enough or are you ready to run? See Ya Love Bon-Bon  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Bill...good to read you again.. You have been missed. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
sounds like your vision is 20/20 or better. Beautiful poem and lucky lady. ~Sadelite~ |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
^*Yet I can still see through the dim*^  Magnificent! This is a lovely piece. Its wonderful that you can still see the beauty when the lights are out. Whoever you are writing this about is a very lucky person!! ^*Kim*^ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi BC ~~ Such a soft touch to this romantic poem. Wishing you a day filled with love and hugs. Happy Valentine's Day, Marti |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bill, it's like peeking into the moonlit room and seeing with your eyes ... in wonderment. This is as romantic and sweet as it can get. Love and Happy Valentine's Day! Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yet I can still see through the dim, and I’m still in wonderment of the beauty I have seen with my eyes… ~~~~ and what baby blues to see with, such clarity of poetic vision you have |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...Amazing images and wonderfully romantic, as always. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, you are looking beyond loves eyes indeed to the heavens of it! (big angel hugs) Yay, Happy Valentines Day, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Much enjoyed this! Grover. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Yes, that's what eyes are for . . . |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
This was very tender and sweet Bill I really enjoyed it! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
reading this Bill, I think you see such beauty with eyes open, or closed. Wonderful. jwesley |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful write, Bill! *S* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a gentle, touching love song you've written. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ as ever this is so lovely, and so full of passion.... ~~**~~ |
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