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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-02-14 08:11 AM


Gifting

He gifts a coup of memories view
Made of mornings crystal dew
As flowers whisper wistful sighs
The fragrance of a love-gone bye

Underneath a sky of blue
Dreaming in a mental coup
Reeling in a fields appeal
More real to him than any real

As Jasper as translucent stone
Shining through familiar tone
Making mimes of happy past
On strings that hold forever’s last

An heir in symbols sweet estate
He lives the past in full elate
The playing of a piano-roll
A figment of his heart and soul

And in the grace he smiles in sleep
Without a trace of tear in weep



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-02-14 08:14 AM



A beautiful gift on a lovely Valentine's Day!  Give my regards to Isabelle this morning, Sy...thank her for letting you share yourself with us all!  

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-02-14 08:24 AM


Yes, all that Karilea said

Hope you spend a wonderful day with your Valentine

M

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2004-02-14 08:41 AM


Seymour - not much more I can add on this sunny Saturday morning...

BC

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4 posted 2004-02-14 08:44 AM


Happy Valentines Day Sy-babers

Randy brought me raspberry tea this morn

Well I cant say what I might believe ...
but if God made you ... he's in love with me.

5 for fighting

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-02-14 09:01 AM


Sunshine
Before I get carried away with the day, I send a Happy Valentine dear.

Maureen,
Happy Valentine sweet. Hugs.

Bill,
Thank you my friend.

JM,
Happy Valentine Tink.
Miss you WWRS

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6 posted 2004-02-14 09:11 AM


"As Jasper as translucent stone
Shining through familiar tone
Making mimes of happy past
On strings that hold forever’s last"

Simply wonderful through and through
not just this verse, whole poem too,
written by our own sweet Sy,

happy Valentines Day to you and yours!
                    ~Sadie~


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-02-14 09:34 AM


Sadie,
You are a sweet lady. Happy Valentine.

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8 posted 2004-02-14 09:40 AM


Beautiful words you penned for us this morning Sy!
May you and Isabel have a wonderful Valentine's Day!
Special tea this morn...I'll pour.
~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy~

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-02-14 09:44 AM


Nancy,
You pour I'll drink,


NewEnglandlazurlu
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10 posted 2004-02-14 10:11 AM


Good Morning Sy ~~ Your words and thoughts make my heart leap. A wonderful poem.

Thank you and wishing you and your bride a very Happy Valentine's Day.

Smiles and Hugs, Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-02-14 10:16 AM


Marti,
You are a sweetheart, thank you and Happy Valentine day.

Martie
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12 posted 2004-02-14 10:27 AM


Sy

"As Jasper as translucent stone
Shining through familiar tone
Making mimes of happy past
On strings that hold forever’s last"

I loved this!  You are they honey on my toast.  

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-02-14 10:31 AM


Martie
You mean a sweet mouth full?

Margherita
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14 posted 2004-02-14 11:19 AM


He gifts a coup of memories view
Made of mornings crystal dew
As flowers whisper wistful sighs
The fragrance of a love-gone bye


Your words are dancing, right into my heart.
Happy Valentine's Day, Poet!
Love and hugs. Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2004-02-14 11:21 AM


Margherita
Thank you and a Happy Valentine to you.

iliana
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16 posted 2004-02-16 10:28 PM


"An heir in symbols sweet estate
He lives the past in full elate
The playing of a piano-roll
A figment of his heart and soul"

Wonderful analogies always, especially here.  Enjoyed this so much.  

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2004-02-16 11:24 PM


iliana
Thank you so much for the read and reply.

passing shadows
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18 posted 2004-02-17 04:51 AM


*big smile* you always make me smile...hmmmm
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2004-02-17 07:45 AM


passing,
Thank you sweet heart.

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