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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-02-14 04:11 AM




Somewhere between time and space
Beyond the mountains and oceans
I found you You had a beauty I never seen
A spirit of ten thousand worriors
Yet you were boken just like me
My inner soul came alive
As I saw the light in your eyes
The connection I never felt before
In your broken gentle heart
I felt the strength to survive


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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-02-14 04:44 AM


We always are drawn to those alike ...
May your broken spirits be healed and may you soar high.
This is lovely.
Happy Valentine!
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-02-14 05:25 AM


precious
Grover
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3 posted 2004-02-14 05:49 PM


A very nice poem, I really liked this! Grover.
WinterWren
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4 posted 2004-02-14 06:08 PM


I like this alot. Short but sweet.
Thanks for sharing.
Excellent job.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

MGROVES
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5 posted 2004-02-14 08:38 PM


i just wanted to give my heart filled thanks to all of you


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