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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Always I never will forget, that sudden sweetness in the air The honeyed glow of heaven, falling soft upon your hair That hush before the dawn, of every dream we ever dare The juncture at the crossroads, of the love we have to share I never will forget the, first time that I saw your eyes Something dawned on me, that I had never realized I knew right at that moment, every dream could still come true I knew that I could never love, nobody else but you Did you know that you are in my every waking thought? Did you know that you have been, in every dream I’ve caught? Do you know that you are every beat within my heart? Do you know how much I’ve loved you from the very start? Have I ever told you, you’re in every breath I take? Or that you have always been in every wish I make? Have I ever touched you, in a way that lets you know? Have I ever sang a song, that made your passion flow? Your my favorite poem, that I am ever going to read Your the only love, that I am ever going to need You are every love song, that the world has ever known You are every pretty flower, that has ever grown Have I ever told you just how much you mean to me? Do you know how many things your heart has made me see? Have I ever touched you, in a way that makes you glow? Have you ever heard a secret you already know? You are every single ray, of sun that ever shined You are every thing, that I had ever hoped to find You have every tender kiss, my lips will ever need You are every breath, that I am ever going to breathe I want to hold your hand, when all the wind begins to blow I want to be there by your side, so you will always know I want to be there with you, on the highest mountain top I want to be there with you, if the world should ever stop All I want to do is hold you, when your feeling blue All I want to do is spend, a lifetime loving you All I want to do is sing you, love songs in the park All I want to do is be there, when the world gets dark You are every love song, that two lovers ever felt Every time I think of you, my heart begins to melt You are every whisper, in the wind that ever blew You are every hope and dream, that ever will come true The first time that I saw you, I could not believe my eyes You are every rainbow, that has ever kissed the sky I felt as if the sand ran out and time forgot to start It felt as if your hand reached in and gently squeezed my heart I knew right at that moment, every dream had just come true I know that I will never love, no body else but you Your my favorite poem, I know the verses all by heart I knew that I would always love you, from the very start You are every special moment, that has ever been You are all the light, from every candle in the wind I never will forget, that sudden sweetness in the air The honeyed glow of heaven, falling soft upon your hair If you read this and your tears, are falling on the floor Then you’ll know exactly who, this song, was written for I am right there with you, wiping every tear away I am giving you a kiss and in your arms I’ll stay You will have to be the one, to tell me when to go Close your eyes and listen, and your heart will let you know And even if you never tell me, that you love me too I just had to tell you, that I’m so in love with you So honey please just take this song, and hold it to your heart Knowing that the love I have, for you will never part If I have to wait a million lifetimes for your love I will always wait for you, within the clouds above I will wait until the day, you also love me too I will always be there honey, so in love with you [This message has been edited by Richy (02-14-2004 05:10 AM).] |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
WOW WOW WOW...you are going to make every woman who reads this swoon! what a magnificant declaration of love! WOW richy, oh i think there will be plenty of *sighs* on this one! so here is mine....****sigh*****  Happy Valentines Day  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
If I have to wait a million lifetimes for your love I will always wait for you, within the clouds above Gosh, dear Richy, who could ever have told that you were speaking of a love, you are still waiting for??? This is a spectacular waterfall of love pouring from your heart. How can "the One" not run ... into your loving arms? Beautiful! Happy Valentine. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This IS a song, Richy! Your lady-love will deem it a  ! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a definite keeper!  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Richy my friends, this is just to wonderful, such talent you show here, so very much enjoyed and a keeper, may you not have to wait too long for your love. Sincerely Rick |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Richy, you are definitely desperately in love with someone special. How lucky she is! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sigh!!!! such love you have shown in your writing ..... what a lucky lady she must be Hope |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
gee, i never knew.........  seriously tho in my every waking thought? Did you know that you have been, in every dream I’ve caught? Youve said it well in each stanza, she should love it |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow is right... just remember to tell her... have a Happy Valentine's Day Richy *s M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richy There is so much love in this....and a song? I could hear it sing as I read it. Did anyone ever tell you that you look a little like Carlos Santana? I wish you love! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Richy To me this is an epopee. It will be read and reread for a very long time. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!! She is one lucky lady indeed! ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(does happy Valentine dance) Awwwwwwwww, this made me cry as this is soooooooo beautiful and though being lengthy not once did my eyes go half-closed as your love sounded so pure and so true as all your poetry is! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, and I wish for this valentine to be yoursd always in eternal heavenly happiness, yay, I dream so much to get to love a special girl like this someday, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dawn ~ Dawn, you are just too sweet you know that? I’m lucky to know you! I hope you had a wonderful day!  Margherita ~ Margherita, I was so touched by your words. How sweet of you to say something like that. Thank You. You have such a wonderful heart. Karilea ~ Thanks Karilea! I hope your Valentine’s was very special! Dixie ~ Thank you Dixie. I’m always happy to see you here! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Rick ~ Thank You Rick! That means a lot to me coming from you. I wish you all the best Youngatheart ~ I want to thank you for all of your kindness Youngatheart. Your wonderful comments are always appreciated. Hope ~ Hope, it is always so nice to hear from you. Thank you so much for your warm comments! Michelle ~ Michelle, that was really cute! What a nice surprise it was to hear from you. I hope your Valentines Day was very special. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Martie, thank you so much! Could you really hear it sing? I wonder if we both hear it in the same tune? Carlos Santana? No. lol Ernest Borgnine? Yes lol Martie, I wish you nothing but happiness |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Maureen ~ Thanks so much Maureen. That was very sweet of you to say. I hope you had a very memorable evening. Seymour ~ An epopee, an epopee, an epopee... Sy, you ever say that three times, real fast... it’s all kinds of fun... Oh, I’m sorry... where was I? Sy, I so appreciate it when I see your comments. Thanks so much. I hope you had a terrific day! Nancy ~ Nancy, it’s just not the same, without one of your lovely comments. I hope your day was filled with love and joy! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Noah ~ Little brother Noah (okay, I’m old enough to be your grandfather, you can quit laughing now... lol), it’s okay, my eyes were all the way crossed at the first verse... lol Noah, thanks for always being there, to show us what caring, compassion, and friendship is all about. Your heart is as pure as could be.And all of us are enriched, by your everlasting and selfless kindness. Thanks dear friend  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richy~ And just how lovely is this ??? Very ! Valentine *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Tenacious work! Very good write! Grover. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My goodness Richy, this is absolutely wonderful. One lucky lady is she that has this beauty read to her! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Have I ever told you, you’re in every breath I take? Or that you have always been in every wish I make? This is more than enough to melt a heart. *S* Absolutely beautiful! *S* |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Richy, OMG! I hope the one you wrote this for has had a chance to read this. This is excellent! Take Care, ~Laura~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Marge, Grover, Chris, Suthern, and Parisgrl, Thank you all so much for your wonderful comments! I so appreciate them! |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Awesome write! I hope everything works out. Really inspirational. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Sweeeeeeeeet! I bought my share of mistakes so I might see some interest. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hey Richy You are such a master at your craft and such a hopeless romantic. Your words were filled with love and were so sincere....I loved it! "Love........will put it's hook into your heart and force you to know that of all strong things, nothing is so strong, so irresistible, as divine love" Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Kristabell, and Chanson, it is so very nice to meet you! Thanks so much for dropping in and for the warm comments! Sue ~ I don't know about the master part, but the hopless thing... that one, you got right on the money... Thanks so much everyone |
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