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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-02-13 08:43 PM


Linking your eyes to my backbone
I sang
Of a world
Of two

Loving you in the morning
Seeing you in the evening
In my mind
And my behaviour

Magic


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1 posted 2004-02-13 08:59 PM


For my own reasons...I say this piece is...

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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2 posted 2004-02-13 09:08 PM


I agree fully with my sister Enchantress.... magic   Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

iliana
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3 posted 2004-02-13 11:55 PM


I love poems about the magic that flows between people!
DavePage
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4 posted 2004-02-16 04:25 PM


Only problem is we never see the hands of the conjurer

Elemental passion bypassing everything where the bones kick the brain to wake

Dave

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