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0 posted 2004-02-13 08:30 PM


    

BE GOOD
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/11/01

Be good
Be true
You should
Be nothing else but you

Be good
Be unique
By these means you could
Find your inner-peace

    

Be good
Be special
There will be times you are misunderstood
But the sweetness is inevitable

Be good
Never change
Be good
Seize the day!

    

    



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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1 posted 2004-02-13 08:35 PM


Wonderful Noah...and such beautiful pics.
Happy Valentine's Day to you!

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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2 posted 2004-02-13 11:52 PM


Those are great pictures, especially the second one. Fantastic. And I like the way they punctuate the poem, but don't overshadow it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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3 posted 2004-02-13 11:56 PM



Fabulous Noah!
Have a wonderful and
Happy Valentine's Day!

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