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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-02-13 08:14 PM


Joking Apologies for the English English plus the English slang of course - we just dont keep the Colonies in check these days

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Mickey was the least they took
Air was fresh today
Spraying under her arms
Took your breath away

Money wasted her mother said
A man
Take you away
He wont be interested in your arms
He'll have other games to play
And score

Cold's coming in
Your mouth not your arms
You'll spray
And wobbling your backside around
That you rue
This day

Why dont you go for Jimmy
I spoke to his mother today
He's got no aires and graces
Nor favour on the way

Eat your beans
Weight's lost on you
All those potatoes
In the stew

We need the money
Factory will see you through
Don't be late
Your early shift
And I check the shift
You're wearing

I'll speak to Brenda
Morning
Tell her
You'll walk with Jim

Only right
Us being so close
Their's a fresh air
Coming in
And I dont want strangers
In this house

Nor a bit of sin



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1 posted 2004-02-13 09:04 PM


Awww...I see now. Very interesting. Tell us more please? Chris

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I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-02-15 08:01 AM


Nightshade

Many thanks for your encouragement.

Mary 'in my mind' was a factory worker finding happiness where I suppose some of us wouldn't look and would sneer.

The idea came from two songs and I haven't really stolen the words.

Ralph McTell and Roger Whittaker are two little known English singers - Roger sang "Durham Town" and Ralph "Factory Girl".

I suppose the "Flying Pickets" also echo'd an idea as well.

regards

Dave

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