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SmartChick
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0 posted 2004-02-13 08:07 PM



Compassion
~ By Sue ~

I will go to work
Giving all the compassion
I feel deep inside
Putting a little pleasure
In their lives just for today

2-12-04

© Copyright 2004 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-02-13 08:13 PM


You know, I'm glad you dated the poem, Sue.  My grandmother's birthday was yesterday - she is 92, and bedridden, due to several strokes over the last few years.  If not for the compassion of a 24/7 nurse in her daughter's home, she would be in a nursing home.

Compassion is so important.  Thank you for sharing!

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-02-13 08:17 PM


You have such a beautiful, caring, compassionate soul Sue.
Beautiful thoughts here...be well.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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3 posted 2004-02-13 09:29 PM


SweetSue~
I am sure your sweet smile will be the best Valentine they could receive~
Bless your heart, sweetie~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

iliana
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4 posted 2004-02-13 11:37 PM


Thank goodness for compassionate people!  Keep 'em comin', Sue!
Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2004-02-13 11:39 PM


When you brighten someone's day, you make the angels sing. I like the kindness that breathes in this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-02-14 01:30 AM


Sue, I pray that God will continue
to give you the strength you need
to care for these sweet people. They
need someone with the compassions and
love that you give to them.
Hugs to you, sweet lady, and give
them a hug for me,

Ethel
          


Margherita
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7 posted 2004-02-14 04:49 AM


Dear Sue, you are such a beautiful compassionate soul!
Your beautiful words touch a cord deep within.
May everything you do with your heart full of love, come back to you thousandfold.
Love, Margherita

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2004-02-14 08:32 AM


SmartChick - way to go. A little caring for them indeed helps the day...

BC

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2004-02-14 08:58 AM



Sue, you have more  strength that you know

Have a wonderful day...give yourself the hugs you deserve

M

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