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Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

0 posted 2004-02-13 07:21 PM

My Sentiments Exactly

I've loved you for all these years
when myriads
of multi-coloured butterflies took wing
when lashing rapids
offered us a cold finger
when green-leafed trees `
bowed to our everything
when good times left
and came again to linger

when work was play
before play became work...

we've had each other all these years.

©2004 Grover Gall

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-02-13 07:36 PM

Grover,
This beautifully tells it all so clearly, but at the same time gives the reader paths to explore. I really like your writing.
Sadelite

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-02-13 07:37 PM

And may you and your Valentine have many more happy ones together!

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2004-02-13 07:38 PM

enjoyed

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-02-13 07:40 PM

nice expressive and romantic too

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2004-02-14 12:17 PM

Fantastic Grover!
I hope you and yours
have a Happy Valentines Day!

Richy

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2004-02-14 12:28 PM

sigh....just wonderful!

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-02-14 12:30 PM

Grover -- I liked! Happy Valentine's Day! .......jo

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2004-02-14 01:11 AM

loved it, i wish i could find a heart as true as yours m.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2004-02-14 02:21 AM

Lucky you!
So nicely, Grover~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2004-02-14 05:12 AM

Very beautifully expressed sentiments.
Happy Valentine's Day!
Love, Margherita

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2004-02-14 10:03 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yay, and may these rainbow butterflies always flitter and cast prisms in the garden of your heart with sunbeam kisses, yay! (big angel hugs) Happy Valentines Day, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Grover, thank you for sharing!