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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-02-13 01:29 PM






~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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© Copyright 2004 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-13 01:34 PM


Loverly Margie gal!
Amazing how you do these word pics!
~Luv & Hugs, Nancy~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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2 posted 2004-02-13 01:39 PM


oh Marge!  you got me with this one, just lovely!
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3 posted 2004-02-13 01:49 PM


gorgeous!

you should see some of the sunsets over the golf course where I work...I have to get a camera!

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4 posted 2004-02-13 03:12 PM


short but sweet , a good vibe ..nice job

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5 posted 2004-02-13 03:26 PM


Balladeer loved to write
It gave him pleasure and delight
As in a fever he was gripped
Writin' down poetic script

He wrote 'bout Toe, (not on his foot)
Then wrote about me in his book
(I thought it nice, to be 'bout me)
Then read the title "Toebotomy"

Sky writing was a later fad,
His memory now getting bad,
He stopped the plane to dot an "i"
And tumbled from the word filled sky.


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6 posted 2004-02-13 03:31 PM


Pink definitely brings a smile. *S*

And Toe... rofg... *S*

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7 posted 2004-02-13 04:03 PM


The sky is a beautiful poem, even without the writing....

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

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8 posted 2004-02-13 04:09 PM


Marge,
As sweet as you.

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9 posted 2004-02-13 06:10 PM


Dear Marge:  So beautiful! I love those pink sunsets!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2004-02-13 07:40 PM


You are richly inspired! Grover.
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11 posted 2004-02-13 07:45 PM


This is sooo rich!  Short, sweet, and excellent!   Thank you for sending the beautiful imagery this way.
             Sadie

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12 posted 2004-02-13 07:59 PM


This is so beautiful Marge. You are so talented.
iliana
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13 posted 2004-02-14 12:43 PM


Marge, you are an artist!
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14 posted 2004-02-14 12:59 PM


here, where i am, the sky turns a brilliant pink and purple..like a very vivid intense painting..its amazing..i had never seen a sunset like this anywhere else..one day i'll have to photograph it!

very pretty poem!

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15 posted 2004-02-14 07:47 PM


Ahhhhhh!

Words to match a breathtaking sky.

Huggles, Marti

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16 posted 2004-02-14 08:03 PM


Marge/sis

So perdy!!  

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