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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-02-13 08:25 AM



The dew was seductive
as it ran down her face
leaving moist reminders
of the places it had last been

Between the spring it came
the mountains of rain
melting the winter away

All at one secret moment,
diving deep into the sea
was the time i lost above and beyond my grasping

..hold the old as you become the new...inside

JDWIII

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-02-13 08:39 AM


wolf
Good, enjoyed the read.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-02-13 09:13 AM


Beautiful and very sentimental...enjoyed a lot
ice
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3 posted 2004-02-13 09:28 AM


Love this.....

"The dew was seductive
as it ran down her face
leaving moist reminders
of the places it had last been"

Like manna from heaven....
enjoyed
_______ice
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4 posted 2004-02-13 12:40 PM


I love it when that happens
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5 posted 2004-02-13 01:18 PM


"...hold the old as you become the new...inside"


love it ^_^

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aujussy wolf
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6 posted 2004-02-16 12:55 PM


Thanks : ) for the comments , i am glad to find such a great place to share poems , to many more ... wolfy
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7 posted 2004-02-16 03:19 AM


i feel this..
mighty fine writin' here
nice to meet you

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-02-16 03:58 AM


nice write..nice pic

good to see you

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9 posted 2004-02-16 10:41 PM


Wonderfully penned and wise words!
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10 posted 2004-02-17 05:29 PM


Hello Neighbor...
Excellent write...familiar in many ways to some of my own thoughts.  Well done.
TD

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